5. 邏輯域錯(cuò)誤。這個(gè)應(yīng)該不難判斷，但還是經(jīng)常出錯(cuò)：

　　If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改為neither of them care about money...]

　　其他：

　　語(yǔ)義重復(fù)

　　In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一詞本身就表示說(shuō)話(huà)人的觀點(diǎn)，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that... is right]

　　share many common interests [common與share屬同義反復(fù)，可改為have many common interests或share many interests]

　　論斷過(guò)于絕對(duì)，缺乏足夠思考

　　A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到這個(gè)程度]

　　句義嚴(yán)重反復(fù)，缺乏變化

　　Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多說(shuō)了]

　　連詞錯(cuò)誤

　　It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一詞顯然應(yīng)該是that，不過(guò)更通順的說(shuō)法應(yīng)該是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]

　　不會(huì)使用照應(yīng)語(yǔ)

　　We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people顯然應(yīng)該是同指關(guān)系，后面的other people應(yīng)改為them才對(duì)]

　　作文是對(duì)語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用，可以集中體現(xiàn)出學(xué)習(xí)者的基本功和思維能力;語(yǔ)感非常重要，不過(guò)要形成好的語(yǔ)感還需要長(zhǎng)期的反復(fù)訓(xùn)練。過(guò)去指導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)大四學(xué)生畢業(yè)論文，每屆都發(fā)現(xiàn)有不少已經(jīng)過(guò)了TEM8的英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言能力有明顯缺陷。寫(xiě)作能力必須建立在大量閱讀、用心感受和無(wú)數(shù)次練習(xí)的基礎(chǔ)上，對(duì)此曾對(duì)學(xué)生反復(fù)講過(guò)多次，不過(guò)由于無(wú)法立竿見(jiàn)影，多數(shù)學(xué)生不能很好地堅(jiān)持，很是遺憾。

　　5. 邏輯域錯(cuò)誤。這個(gè)應(yīng)該不難判斷，但還是經(jīng)常出錯(cuò)：

　　If people become friends, both of them wont care about money... [可改為neither of them care about money...]

　　其他：

　　語(yǔ)義重復(fù)

　　In my opinion, I agree with the view that... [agree一詞本身就表示說(shuō)話(huà)人的觀點(diǎn)，可將In my opinion去掉，或把后面的一半改為the view that... is right]

　　share many common interests [common與share屬同義反復(fù)，可改為have many common interests或share many interests]

　　論斷過(guò)于絕對(duì)，缺乏足夠思考

　　A person with good finance will not understand why his poor friend gets on a sardine-jam like bus and always choose to dine at some poor-condition restaurant at the roadsides... [相信富人也不至于笨到這個(gè)程度]

　　句義嚴(yán)重反復(fù)，缺乏變化

　　Some people believe that financial disparity affects friendship. Some believe that financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. For my part, I agree with the latter, because financial disparity doesnt affect friendship. [不必多說(shuō)了]

　　連詞錯(cuò)誤

　　It is not difficult to imagine if those rich people have some poor friends with common interests. [if一詞顯然應(yīng)該是that，不過(guò)更通順的說(shuō)法應(yīng)該是It is not difficult to imagine rich people having some poor friends with similar interests.]

　　不會(huì)使用照應(yīng)語(yǔ)

　　We wont ask people whether they have much money or not when making friends with other people. [people和other people顯然應(yīng)該是同指關(guān)系，后面的other people應(yīng)改為them才對(duì)]

　　作文是對(duì)語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用，可以集中體現(xiàn)出學(xué)習(xí)者的基本功和思維能力;語(yǔ)感非常重要，不過(guò)要形成好的語(yǔ)感還需要長(zhǎng)期的反復(fù)訓(xùn)練。過(guò)去指導(dǎo)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)大四學(xué)生畢業(yè)論文，每屆都發(fā)現(xiàn)有不少已經(jīng)過(guò)了TEM8的英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言能力有明顯缺陷。寫(xiě)作能力必須建立在大量閱讀、用心感受和無(wú)數(shù)次練習(xí)的基礎(chǔ)上，對(duì)此曾對(duì)學(xué)生反復(fù)講過(guò)多次，不過(guò)由于無(wú)法立竿見(jiàn)影，多數(shù)學(xué)生不能很好地堅(jiān)持，很是遺憾。