考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear sir,

　　I am writing for the position that your company advertising on TIME newspaper.I believe I will be fit for it because of my experience an knowledge.

　　I have had worked for a famous IT company as a manager.I solved many problems there.With time is going ,I accumulate amount of experience.I am sure I am comptent for the position for manager you are employing.As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand behavior of employers.Therefore I can manage them better.You will be never regret if employed me.

　　I look forward to your repaly.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear sir(因為不知道是男士還是女士，改成Sir or Madam),I am writing for the position that your company advertising(這里應該用動詞的過去時advertised) on TIME newspaper. I believe I will be fit(這里需要用一個形容詞) for it because of my experience an(and?) knowledge.

　　I have had(去掉，后面的work是動詞) worked for a famous IT company as a manager(for X years). I solved many problems there. With time is going(going on), I accumulate amount of(an amount of或是amounts of) experience. I am sure I am comptent(拼寫錯誤，competent) for the position for manager you are employing(這里要表達的是什么意思?). As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand (加定冠詞the) behavior of employers. Therefore I can manage them better. You will be never regret if employed me.

　　I look forward to your repaly(拼寫錯誤replay).

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li(這里沒有空格) ming(m大寫) (落款部分寫在信件右下角) 點評：5-6分細節性的語法錯誤比較多，一方面需要細心，另一方面需要加強語法知識的學習。

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear sir,

　　I am writing for the position that your company advertising on TIME newspaper.I believe I will be fit for it because of my experience an knowledge.

　　I have had worked for a famous IT company as a manager.I solved many problems there.With time is going ,I accumulate amount of experience.I am sure I am comptent for the position for manager you are employing.As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand behavior of employers.Therefore I can manage them better.You will be never regret if employed me.

　　I look forward to your repaly.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear sir(因為不知道是男士還是女士，改成Sir or Madam),I am writing for the position that your company advertising(這里應該用動詞的過去時advertised) on TIME newspaper. I believe I will be fit(這里需要用一個形容詞) for it because of my experience an(and?) knowledge.

　　I have had(去掉，后面的work是動詞) worked for a famous IT company as a manager(for X years). I solved many problems there. With time is going(going on), I accumulate amount of(an amount of或是amounts of) experience. I am sure I am comptent(拼寫錯誤，competent) for the position for manager you are employing(這里要表達的是什么意思?). As reading lots of books about psychology, I can well understand (加定冠詞the) behavior of employers. Therefore I can manage them better. You will be never regret if employed me.

　　I look forward to your repaly(拼寫錯誤replay).

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li(這里沒有空格) ming(m大寫) (落款部分寫在信件右下角) 點評：5-6分細節性的語法錯誤比較多，一方面需要細心，另一方面需要加強語法知識的學習。