Yours sincerely,

　　LI Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear sir(Sir) or Madam, I am a senior student from the Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position of journalist which you have advertised on your websit(拼寫錯誤). I am sure that I am qualified. Firstly, what I have stydied(拼寫錯誤) in the past four years was highly in accordance with the rules your offerend(拼寫錯誤). Secondly, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a journalist. Thirdly, I has cultivated strong ability of teamwork in school .I know whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success. Finally, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience . I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details in person the relevance of my educational background, hobbies and working experiences. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LI Ming(落款部分位于右下角) 點評：7-8分第二段的第三條內容要簡化，或者是直接換做work experience，簡歷最重要的兩方面一是學歷，而是經歷。