訓練4　短文改錯(Ⅳ)A

　　(2024·太原二模)－rise building where is opposite a busy road.During the day we can hear the traffic passed outside, uilding, so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two window.I often walk away through the park to get to the bus stop on the other's side.I go to work by bus every day.Wait for the bus takes me some time.The town centre is quite near to my flat, so it's convenience for both shopping and entertainment.It's really a good place to live.Warmly welcome to your neighbourhood.

　　【答案】　－rise building

　　is opposite a busy road.During the day we can hear the traffic

　　outside, unately, there

　　a park just outside our building, so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two .I often walk　 through the park to get to the bus stop on the

　　side. I go to work by bus every day. for the bus takes me some time.The own centre is quite near to my flat,

　　for both shopping and entertainment.It's really a good place to live ．Warmly welcome to

　　neighbourhood.B

　　(2024·石家莊質檢) your requirements: for one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another, I'm good at both English or Fine Arts.I'm either skilled in using computers.I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

　　I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

　　【答案】　 school paper.I'm

　　this letter to apply for the position.

　　I'm Li Hua， Senior Three student in our school.In my view, I

　　your requirements: for one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to others; for another, I'm good at both English

　　Fine Arts. I'm

　　skilled in using computers.I would be glad if you could offer

　　me an

　　opportunity for an interview.

　　I'm looking forward to your

　　reply at your earliest .

　　C

　　(2024·湖北七市聯考) I'm glad to have met you and become friend with you.I miss you very well and thus I'm writing to tell you anything about my new life at college.

　　My new school is so beautiful as a huge garden.There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.My teachers are all kind and I believe, with time go by, I'll make a great progress.My classmates are very friendly and I made many new friends here.I feel that my new life is very excited, but I also realize that it is full of challenges.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a brightly future.Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.

　　I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Tom

　　【答案】　 I'm glad to have met you and become

　　with you.I miss you very

　　and thus I'm writing to tell you

　　about my new life at college.

　　My new school is beautiful as a huge garden.There

　　green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.My teachers are all kind and I believe, with time

　　by, I'll make

　　great progress.My classmates are very friendly and I

　　made many new friends here.I feel that my new life is very ， but also realize that it is full of challenges.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a

　　future.Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.

　　I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Tom

　　D

　　(2024·成都二模)－booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cellphone.Soon it came, －tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app.So later, is cellphone to get the next order.It was just then when I began to worry about my safety. What's bad, the driver's informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi－booking app the next time.【答案】　 to call a taxi.But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi－booking app my friend

　　recommended and I booked a taxi through my cellphone.Soon it came,

　　of my high－tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app.

　　later,

　　his cellphone to get the next order.It was just then

　　I began to worry about my safety.What's

　　， the driver's

　　might be unreliable.How can we passengers' legal rights be if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi－booking app

　　next time.E

　　(2024·柳州模擬) Since their lack of education mainly result from low family income, to collect money for them is of greatly importance.With enough money, they will finish their education very easily than before.Besides, good teachers are also needed improve the teaching in such areas.They can teach there but help train the local teachers.What's more, we can organize various event to increase these children's interest at learning.We can also guide them to realize the importance of education to their future.After of all, their willingness to learn is the key to continue their school education.

　　【答案】　ren in poor areas complete

　　basic education? Since their lack of education mainly

　　from low family income, to collect money for them is of

　　importance.With enough money, they will finish their education

　　easily than before.Besides, good teachers are also needed

　　improve the teaching in such areas.They can teach there

　　help train the local teachers.What's more, we can organize various to increase these

　　children's interest

　　learning.We can also guide them to realize

　　importance of education to their future.After

　　all，their willingness to learn is the key to

　　their school education.

　　F

　　(2024·昆明質檢)e restaurants, buses and lifts.Is it necessary for them do so? Besides, some people

　　choose loud and annoyed music as their ringtones.It sounds very noisy but unpleasant, especially

　　in the cinema.Others make a phone call while you are in conversation with him, which, I think,

　　is real rude.I'd like to remind the mobile phone user: Please care about other people's feelings

　　when used a phone.Try not to disturb the people around you.

　　【答案】　 most of

　　us now.However, there

　　some people out there who use their mobile phones impolitely.Some people talk loudly

　　the phone in public places like restaurants, buses and lifts.Is it necessary for them

　　do so? Besides, some people choose loud and

　　music as their ringtones.It sounds very noisy

　　unpleasant, especially in the cinema.Others make a phone call while you are in conversation with ， which, I think, is rude.I'd like to remind the mobile phone

　　: Please care about other people's feelings when

　　a phone.Try not to disturb the people around you.

　　訓練4　短文改錯(Ⅳ)A

　　(2024·太原二模)－rise building where is opposite a busy road.During the day we can hear the traffic passed outside, uilding, so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two window.I often walk away through the park to get to the bus stop on the other's side.I go to work by bus every day.Wait for the bus takes me some time.The town centre is quite near to my flat, so it's convenience for both shopping and entertainment.It's really a good place to live.Warmly welcome to your neighbourhood.

　　【答案】　－rise building

　　is opposite a busy road.During the day we can hear the traffic

　　outside, unately, there

　　a park just outside our building, so we have a pleasant view of grass and trees from our living room with two .I often walk　 through the park to get to the bus stop on the

　　side. I go to work by bus every day. for the bus takes me some time.The own centre is quite near to my flat,

　　for both shopping and entertainment.It's really a good place to live ．Warmly welcome to

　　neighbourhood.B

　　(2024·石家莊質檢) your requirements: for one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others; for another, I'm good at both English or Fine Arts.I'm either skilled in using computers.I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview.

　　I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient.

　　【答案】　 school paper.I'm

　　this letter to apply for the position.

　　I'm Li Hua， Senior Three student in our school.In my view, I

　　your requirements: for one thing, I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to others; for another, I'm good at both English

　　Fine Arts. I'm

　　skilled in using computers.I would be glad if you could offer

　　me an

　　opportunity for an interview.

　　I'm looking forward to your

　　reply at your earliest .

　　C

　　(2024·湖北七市聯考) I'm glad to have met you and become friend with you.I miss you very well and thus I'm writing to tell you anything about my new life at college.

　　My new school is so beautiful as a huge garden.There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.My teachers are all kind and I believe, with time go by, I'll make a great progress.My classmates are very friendly and I made many new friends here.I feel that my new life is very excited, but I also realize that it is full of challenges.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a brightly future.Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.

　　I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Tom

　　【答案】　 I'm glad to have met you and become

　　with you.I miss you very

　　and thus I'm writing to tell you

　　about my new life at college.

　　My new school is beautiful as a huge garden.There

　　green grass and colorful flowers everywhere.My teachers are all kind and I believe, with time

　　by, I'll make

　　great progress.My classmates are very friendly and I

　　made many new friends here.I feel that my new life is very ， but also realize that it is full of challenges.I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a

　　future.Of course, I'll also do more exercise to keep fit.

　　I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Tom

　　D

　　(2024·成都二模)－booking app my friend has recommended and I booked a taxi through my cellphone.Soon it came, －tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app.So later, is cellphone to get the next order.It was just then when I began to worry about my safety. What's bad, the driver's informations might be unreliable. How can we passengers' legal rights be protecting if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi－booking app the next time.【答案】　 to call a taxi.But no luck.Then I thought of the taxi－booking app my friend

　　recommended and I booked a taxi through my cellphone.Soon it came,

　　of my high－tech way and satisfied with the convenience brought by the app.

　　later,

　　his cellphone to get the next order.It was just then

　　I began to worry about my safety.What's

　　， the driver's

　　might be unreliable.How can we passengers' legal rights be if something bad happens? So be careful when you use the taxi－booking app

　　next time.E

　　(2024·柳州模擬) Since their lack of education mainly result from low family income, to collect money for them is of greatly importance.With enough money, they will finish their education very easily than before.Besides, good teachers are also needed improve the teaching in such areas.They can teach there but help train the local teachers.What's more, we can organize various event to increase these children's interest at learning.We can also guide them to realize the importance of education to their future.After of all, their willingness to learn is the key to continue their school education.

　　【答案】　ren in poor areas complete

　　basic education? Since their lack of education mainly

　　from low family income, to collect money for them is of

　　importance.With enough money, they will finish their education

　　easily than before.Besides, good teachers are also needed

　　improve the teaching in such areas.They can teach there

　　help train the local teachers.What's more, we can organize various to increase these

　　children's interest

　　learning.We can also guide them to realize

　　importance of education to their future.After

　　all，their willingness to learn is the key to

　　their school education.

　　F

　　(2024·昆明質檢)e restaurants, buses and lifts.Is it necessary for them do so? Besides, some people

　　choose loud and annoyed music as their ringtones.It sounds very noisy but unpleasant, especially

　　in the cinema.Others make a phone call while you are in conversation with him, which, I think,

　　is real rude.I'd like to remind the mobile phone user: Please care about other people's feelings

　　when used a phone.Try not to disturb the people around you.

　　【答案】　 most of

　　us now.However, there

　　some people out there who use their mobile phones impolitely.Some people talk loudly

　　the phone in public places like restaurants, buses and lifts.Is it necessary for them

　　do so? Besides, some people choose loud and

　　music as their ringtones.It sounds very noisy

　　unpleasant, especially in the cinema.Others make a phone call while you are in conversation with ， which, I think, is rude.I'd like to remind the mobile phone

　　: Please care about other people's feelings when

　　a phone.Try not to disturb the people around you.