2024屆牛津英語(yǔ)第二輪復(fù)習(xí)課件 要點(diǎn)作文
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要點(diǎn)作文
(2024·遼寧卷)假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給出版社的編輯寫一封信,表達(dá)你對(duì)現(xiàn)在使用的英語(yǔ)教材的看法,內(nèi)容主要包括:
優(yōu)點(diǎn): 1. 話題廣泛; 2. 圖片豐富; 3. 有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣。 建議:適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。 注意:
1. 詞數(shù)120左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 思路點(diǎn)撥:本文為一篇半開(kāi)放性作文,書信體裁,在寫作時(shí)要注意: 1. 不要遺漏要點(diǎn): (1) 話題廣泛;(2)圖片豐富;(3)有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣;(4)建議: 適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。2. 要恰當(dāng)合理的使用連接成分,高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式,使文章更具文采。3.在答題過(guò)程中還要注意卷面的整潔和書寫的美觀。 However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Best regards,
Li Hua 【作文點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文行文緊湊,過(guò)渡自然;要點(diǎn)完整,表達(dá)清楚;語(yǔ)法正確,時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確;用詞無(wú)誤,很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。文中使用了銜接用語(yǔ),如: such as, I think, What's more, However, Therefore等,還用了復(fù)雜句式,如: 表語(yǔ)從句that we can find a variety of topics;定語(yǔ)從句which can help us understand English better和who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject等。書信格式規(guī)范。
要點(diǎn)作文分為提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)和提供部分寫作要點(diǎn)。提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)的作文要求考生根據(jù)給定的內(nèi)容,在增加適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上,寫出一篇內(nèi)容完整的短文。而另一種情況是命題者給出了部分寫作內(nèi)容,同時(shí)又要求考生根據(jù)提示作一定程度的合理發(fā)揮,具有一定的開(kāi)放性,也就是通常所說(shuō)的半開(kāi)放性作文。
要點(diǎn)作文是高考常考題型,也是最為基本的考查考生寫作能力的題型,學(xué)生寫好要點(diǎn)作文是寫好其他類型作文的基礎(chǔ)。這類試題通常考查的是根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)寫短文、書信、演講、報(bào)道、介紹和說(shuō)明人物或情況等,以檢查考生是否掌握所學(xué)文體的基本格式。 具體寫作時(shí),同學(xué)們還應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面:
1.認(rèn)真審題,防止走題。動(dòng)筆前,考生應(yīng)仔細(xì)閱讀命題要求,確定寫作體裁,寫作格式在湖南省2011年高考閱卷中定為1分;確定寫作要點(diǎn):一是背景材料的部分內(nèi)容是否需要在寫作中予以體現(xiàn),二是命題者給定了寫作方向,需要考生自己發(fā)揮,這個(gè)發(fā)揮范圍有多大,考生都要做到心中有數(shù),做到不過(guò)于發(fā)揮也不遺漏要點(diǎn);確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài),一般情況下,說(shuō)明文、議論文多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),記敘文常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
2.根據(jù)提示,理順寫作要點(diǎn)。理順要點(diǎn)是防止多寫、漏寫、亂寫的保證。高考中,遺漏一個(gè)要點(diǎn)起碼是扣3分的。有時(shí)要點(diǎn)作文所提供的要點(diǎn)順序并非就是寫作時(shí)的順序,因此,寫作前將要點(diǎn)標(biāo)出,并按照一定的邏輯關(guān)系,如時(shí)間順序、空間順序、事件發(fā)生的先后順序等,把這些要點(diǎn)排列并整理好。
3.緊扣要點(diǎn),組句成文。在理順要點(diǎn)后,把這些要點(diǎn)清楚地表達(dá)出來(lái)是非常關(guān)鍵的一步。要點(diǎn)作文不是簡(jiǎn)單地把漢語(yǔ)提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文,不能簡(jiǎn)單地直譯。考生要用平時(shí)自己最有把握的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型,圍繞主題,將意思完整清楚地表達(dá)出來(lái)。在遇到自己想不起來(lái)或找不著相應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)詞匯或句型時(shí),學(xué)會(huì)用相近的句子來(lái)表達(dá)。同時(shí),還要注意使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)、讓步、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等意義的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ),以增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性和流暢性。對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)比較好的考生,提倡有意識(shí)地用“高級(jí)詞匯”來(lái)代替“低級(jí)詞匯”,用較“復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)”來(lái)取代較“簡(jiǎn)單結(jié)構(gòu)”,使文章呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn),增加得高分的機(jī)會(huì)。 例:(2024·浙江卷)你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120詞的短文: 1. 針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?2. 舉例說(shuō)明理由。 注意:短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。 思路點(diǎn)撥:試題材料新穎,貼近考生實(shí)際生活,屬于要點(diǎn)話題作文。 對(duì)既定的話題進(jìn)行討論,考生有一定的自由發(fā)揮空間,暢所欲言,各抒己見(jiàn)。論點(diǎn)明確,論據(jù)充分是得分的關(guān)鍵。如能靈活運(yùn)用學(xué)過(guò)而且熟練的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型,盡量變換句式,長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)使用,并且恰當(dāng)?shù)卮┎逡恍┻^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ),使文章自然、流暢,有較強(qiáng)的邏輯性,文章一定會(huì)脫穎而出。 【參考答案】 In_the_English_Reading_Week,_one_of_my_classmates_recommended_a_quote_to_us,_which_goes_like_this:_“Your_future_depends_on_many_things,_but_mostly_on_you._” I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future. 【參考答案】
Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
一、問(wèn)題解決型
In recent days, we have to face a problem A,which is becoming more and more serious. First說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀. Second, 舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀.
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, 解決方法一. For another thing, 解決方法二. Finally, 解決方法三.
Personally, I believe that我的解決方法. I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because帶來(lái)的好處.
二、積極有利型
Nowadays, 主題plays an important role in our life. For example,舉例說(shuō)明主題的現(xiàn)狀.
Generally, its advantages can be listed as follows. First,好處一. Besides, 好處二.
Through the above analysis, my attitude toward this matter is positive, and the reasons are simple. It not only brings us 好處之一, but also gives us 好處之二 we have not expected.
Therefore, I can see its bright future from now on. 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
假定你叫李平。你的美國(guó)筆友David是個(gè)中國(guó)武術(shù)迷,他給你寫了一封E-mail,要求你用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下中國(guó)武術(shù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn),給他回封E-mail。 1.中國(guó)武術(shù)產(chǎn)生于4,500年前,有著悠久的歷史。 2.是中國(guó)文化的重要組成部分。 3.流派很多,以少林武術(shù)最為出名。 4.中國(guó)武術(shù)可用來(lái)強(qiáng)身、健體、自衛(wèi)。深受青少年的喜愛(ài)。 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
5.最具影響力的武術(shù)明星有李小龍、李連杰、成龍等。 6. 目前全球有100多個(gè)國(guó)家的人們?cè)诹?xí)武。武術(shù)目前還不是奧運(yùn)會(huì)比賽項(xiàng)目,但人們一直在努力使中國(guó)武術(shù)早日進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)會(huì)。 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
注意: 1.詞數(shù):不少于120; 2.參考詞匯:項(xiàng)目—n. event 流派—n. style
3.文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。 Dear David,
Very glad to read your E-mail. You say you are a Wushu fan, and so am I. Now I will tell you something about the Chinese Wushu (the Chinese martial art).
_____________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
I hope you can come to China to learn the Chinese martial art.
Yours, Li Ping
根據(jù)要點(diǎn)作文的寫作技巧,我們按題目提供的要點(diǎn)順序分步進(jìn)行翻譯寫作:
要點(diǎn)一:武術(shù)的歷史 1. 中國(guó)武術(shù)產(chǎn)生于4500年前,有著悠久的歷史。 Wushu has a long history. It was developed 4500 years ago.
要點(diǎn)二:武術(shù)的地位 2. 它是中國(guó)文化的重要組成部分。 Wushu has a great effect on the Chinese culture. Now Wushu is an important part of the Chinese culture.
要點(diǎn)三:武術(shù)的流派 3. 流派很多,以少林武術(shù)最為出名。 There are a variety of Wushu styles, of which Shaolin Wushu is the most famous.
要點(diǎn)四:武術(shù)的作用 4. 中國(guó)武術(shù)可用來(lái)強(qiáng)身、健體、自衛(wèi),深受青少年的喜愛(ài)。 Wushu, which is intended to build up one's health and defend oneself, appeals to young people.
要點(diǎn)五:武術(shù)明星 5.最具影響力的武術(shù)明星有李小龍、李連杰、成龍等。 Film stars like Bruce Lee, Jet Li and Jackie Chan have made great contributions to the spread of Wushu around the world.
要點(diǎn)六:武術(shù)運(yùn)動(dòng)的現(xiàn)狀 6. 目前全球有100多個(gè)國(guó)家的人們?cè)诹?xí)武。 Wushu is practised in over 100 countries in the world. 7. 武術(shù)目前還不是奧運(yùn)會(huì)比賽項(xiàng)目。但人們一直在努力使中國(guó)武術(shù)早日進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)會(huì)。 It is a pity that Wushu is not the event of the Olympic Games. But people have been making every effort to enter Wushu into the Olympics as soon as possible.
感謝您的關(guān)注 Thank you for your attention ! 【參考答案】
Dear_Editor,_
As_a_student_reader,_I_am_writing_to_talk_about_the_English_textbooks_published_by_your_house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.
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要點(diǎn)作文
(2024·遼寧卷)假定你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給出版社的編輯寫一封信,表達(dá)你對(duì)現(xiàn)在使用的英語(yǔ)教材的看法,內(nèi)容主要包括:
優(yōu)點(diǎn): 1. 話題廣泛; 2. 圖片豐富; 3. 有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣。 建議:適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。 注意:
1. 詞數(shù)120左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。 思路點(diǎn)撥:本文為一篇半開(kāi)放性作文,書信體裁,在寫作時(shí)要注意: 1. 不要遺漏要點(diǎn): (1) 話題廣泛;(2)圖片豐富;(3)有助于提高學(xué)習(xí)興趣;(4)建議: 適當(dāng)降低詞匯難度。2. 要恰當(dāng)合理的使用連接成分,高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句式,使文章更具文采。3.在答題過(guò)程中還要注意卷面的整潔和書寫的美觀。 However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, I'd like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Best regards,
Li Hua 【作文點(diǎn)評(píng)】
本文行文緊湊,過(guò)渡自然;要點(diǎn)完整,表達(dá)清楚;語(yǔ)法正確,時(shí)態(tài)準(zhǔn)確;用詞無(wú)誤,很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。文中使用了銜接用語(yǔ),如: such as, I think, What's more, However, Therefore等,還用了復(fù)雜句式,如: 表語(yǔ)從句that we can find a variety of topics;定語(yǔ)從句which can help us understand English better和who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject等。書信格式規(guī)范。
要點(diǎn)作文分為提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)和提供部分寫作要點(diǎn)。提供全部寫作要點(diǎn)的作文要求考生根據(jù)給定的內(nèi)容,在增加適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上,寫出一篇內(nèi)容完整的短文。而另一種情況是命題者給出了部分寫作內(nèi)容,同時(shí)又要求考生根據(jù)提示作一定程度的合理發(fā)揮,具有一定的開(kāi)放性,也就是通常所說(shuō)的半開(kāi)放性作文。
要點(diǎn)作文是高考常考題型,也是最為基本的考查考生寫作能力的題型,學(xué)生寫好要點(diǎn)作文是寫好其他類型作文的基礎(chǔ)。這類試題通常考查的是根據(jù)提示語(yǔ)寫短文、書信、演講、報(bào)道、介紹和說(shuō)明人物或情況等,以檢查考生是否掌握所學(xué)文體的基本格式。 具體寫作時(shí),同學(xué)們還應(yīng)注意以下幾個(gè)方面:
1.認(rèn)真審題,防止走題。動(dòng)筆前,考生應(yīng)仔細(xì)閱讀命題要求,確定寫作體裁,寫作格式在湖南省2011年高考閱卷中定為1分;確定寫作要點(diǎn):一是背景材料的部分內(nèi)容是否需要在寫作中予以體現(xiàn),二是命題者給定了寫作方向,需要考生自己發(fā)揮,這個(gè)發(fā)揮范圍有多大,考生都要做到心中有數(shù),做到不過(guò)于發(fā)揮也不遺漏要點(diǎn);確定人稱和時(shí)態(tài),一般情況下,說(shuō)明文、議論文多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),記敘文常用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
2.根據(jù)提示,理順寫作要點(diǎn)。理順要點(diǎn)是防止多寫、漏寫、亂寫的保證。高考中,遺漏一個(gè)要點(diǎn)起碼是扣3分的。有時(shí)要點(diǎn)作文所提供的要點(diǎn)順序并非就是寫作時(shí)的順序,因此,寫作前將要點(diǎn)標(biāo)出,并按照一定的邏輯關(guān)系,如時(shí)間順序、空間順序、事件發(fā)生的先后順序等,把這些要點(diǎn)排列并整理好。
3.緊扣要點(diǎn),組句成文。在理順要點(diǎn)后,把這些要點(diǎn)清楚地表達(dá)出來(lái)是非常關(guān)鍵的一步。要點(diǎn)作文不是簡(jiǎn)單地把漢語(yǔ)提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文,不能簡(jiǎn)單地直譯。考生要用平時(shí)自己最有把握的單詞、短語(yǔ)和句型,圍繞主題,將意思完整清楚地表達(dá)出來(lái)。在遇到自己想不起來(lái)或找不著相應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)詞匯或句型時(shí),學(xué)會(huì)用相近的句子來(lái)表達(dá)。同時(shí),還要注意使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)、讓步、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等意義的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ),以增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性和流暢性。對(duì)于基礎(chǔ)比較好的考生,提倡有意識(shí)地用“高級(jí)詞匯”來(lái)代替“低級(jí)詞匯”,用較“復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)”來(lái)取代較“簡(jiǎn)單結(jié)構(gòu)”,使文章呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn),增加得高分的機(jī)會(huì)。 例:(2024·浙江卷)你校正在進(jìn)行“英語(yǔ)讀書周”活動(dòng)。該活動(dòng)要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同學(xué)摘錄的句子: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.”請(qǐng)按下列要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇100-120詞的短文: 1. 針對(duì)摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?2. 舉例說(shuō)明理由。 注意:短文的開(kāi)頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。 思路點(diǎn)撥:試題材料新穎,貼近考生實(shí)際生活,屬于要點(diǎn)話題作文。 對(duì)既定的話題進(jìn)行討論,考生有一定的自由發(fā)揮空間,暢所欲言,各抒己見(jiàn)。論點(diǎn)明確,論據(jù)充分是得分的關(guān)鍵。如能靈活運(yùn)用學(xué)過(guò)而且熟練的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型,盡量變換句式,長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)使用,并且恰當(dāng)?shù)卮┎逡恍┻^(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ),使文章自然、流暢,有較強(qiáng)的邏輯性,文章一定會(huì)脫穎而出。 【參考答案】 In_the_English_Reading_Week,_one_of_my_classmates_recommended_a_quote_to_us,_which_goes_like_this:_“Your_future_depends_on_many_things,_but_mostly_on_you._” I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future. 【參考答案】
Take Abraham Lincoln for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.
一、問(wèn)題解決型
In recent days, we have to face a problem A,which is becoming more and more serious. First說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀. Second, 舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀.
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, 解決方法一. For another thing, 解決方法二. Finally, 解決方法三.
Personally, I believe that我的解決方法. I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because帶來(lái)的好處.
二、積極有利型
Nowadays, 主題plays an important role in our life. For example,舉例說(shuō)明主題的現(xiàn)狀.
Generally, its advantages can be listed as follows. First,好處一. Besides, 好處二.
Through the above analysis, my attitude toward this matter is positive, and the reasons are simple. It not only brings us 好處之一, but also gives us 好處之二 we have not expected.
Therefore, I can see its bright future from now on. 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
假定你叫李平。你的美國(guó)筆友David是個(gè)中國(guó)武術(shù)迷,他給你寫了一封E-mail,要求你用英語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)單介紹一下中國(guó)武術(shù)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn),給他回封E-mail。 1.中國(guó)武術(shù)產(chǎn)生于4,500年前,有著悠久的歷史。 2.是中國(guó)文化的重要組成部分。 3.流派很多,以少林武術(shù)最為出名。 4.中國(guó)武術(shù)可用來(lái)強(qiáng)身、健體、自衛(wèi)。深受青少年的喜愛(ài)。 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
5.最具影響力的武術(shù)明星有李小龍、李連杰、成龍等。 6. 目前全球有100多個(gè)國(guó)家的人們?cè)诹?xí)武。武術(shù)目前還不是奧運(yùn)會(huì)比賽項(xiàng)目,但人們一直在努力使中國(guó)武術(shù)早日進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)會(huì)。 【基礎(chǔ)練習(xí)】
注意: 1.詞數(shù):不少于120; 2.參考詞匯:項(xiàng)目—n. event 流派—n. style
3.文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。 Dear David,
Very glad to read your E-mail. You say you are a Wushu fan, and so am I. Now I will tell you something about the Chinese Wushu (the Chinese martial art).
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I hope you can come to China to learn the Chinese martial art.
Yours, Li Ping
根據(jù)要點(diǎn)作文的寫作技巧,我們按題目提供的要點(diǎn)順序分步進(jìn)行翻譯寫作:
要點(diǎn)一:武術(shù)的歷史 1. 中國(guó)武術(shù)產(chǎn)生于4500年前,有著悠久的歷史。 Wushu has a long history. It was developed 4500 years ago.
要點(diǎn)二:武術(shù)的地位 2. 它是中國(guó)文化的重要組成部分。 Wushu has a great effect on the Chinese culture. Now Wushu is an important part of the Chinese culture.
要點(diǎn)三:武術(shù)的流派 3. 流派很多,以少林武術(shù)最為出名。 There are a variety of Wushu styles, of which Shaolin Wushu is the most famous.
要點(diǎn)四:武術(shù)的作用 4. 中國(guó)武術(shù)可用來(lái)強(qiáng)身、健體、自衛(wèi),深受青少年的喜愛(ài)。 Wushu, which is intended to build up one's health and defend oneself, appeals to young people.
要點(diǎn)五:武術(shù)明星 5.最具影響力的武術(shù)明星有李小龍、李連杰、成龍等。 Film stars like Bruce Lee, Jet Li and Jackie Chan have made great contributions to the spread of Wushu around the world.
要點(diǎn)六:武術(shù)運(yùn)動(dòng)的現(xiàn)狀 6. 目前全球有100多個(gè)國(guó)家的人們?cè)诹?xí)武。 Wushu is practised in over 100 countries in the world. 7. 武術(shù)目前還不是奧運(yùn)會(huì)比賽項(xiàng)目。但人們一直在努力使中國(guó)武術(shù)早日進(jìn)入奧運(yùn)會(huì)。 It is a pity that Wushu is not the event of the Olympic Games. But people have been making every effort to enter Wushu into the Olympics as soon as possible.
感謝您的關(guān)注 Thank you for your attention ! 【參考答案】
Dear_Editor,_
As_a_student_reader,_I_am_writing_to_talk_about_the_English_textbooks_published_by_your_house. These books have many advantages. One of them is that we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. What's more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike English have turned out to be interested in the subject.