2024高考英語：短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)（8）及答案解析

　　短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

　　【英語卷(解析)·2024屆浙江省“溫州八校”高三返校聯(lián)考（202408）】第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

　　【答案】【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

　　【答案解析】

　　members---member

　　考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：成長為一名有責(zé)任的成員并不難。因?yàn)榍懊嬗衋,故用單數(shù)形式。

　　happens---happened 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。我記得這件事發(fā)生在一個(gè)下雨的周日下午。事發(fā)生在過去，故用一般過去時(shí)。

　　waiting后面加for

　　考查固定搭配。Wait for sth等待某事；

　　knocked on ---down 考查固定搭配。Knock down sb 撞倒某人；

　　it—which

　　考查定語從句連接詞。Which指代 a passing car

　　a –the

　　考查冠詞。句意：一個(gè)男人立刻沖向那個(gè)女生給她急救；the girl上文已經(jīng)提到過，表示特指；

　　but---and

　　考查連詞；句意：幸運(yùn)地是她傷的不重并且我們送她去了最近的醫(yī)院。兩個(gè)句子是并列關(guān)系；

　　comparing---compared 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：與逃跑的司機(jī)相比，我對(duì)我的所作所為感到很驕傲；

　　aware of 去掉of

　　考查固定短語。Be aware of sth 意識(shí)到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。

　　that –what

　　考查表語從句。句意: 做為社會(huì)的一員，我意識(shí)到，責(zé)任正是這個(gè)社會(huì)所需要的。

　　【英語卷(解析)·2024屆河南省頂級(jí)名校高三入學(xué)定位考試（202408）】

　　B

　　One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.

　　【答案】【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

　　【思路點(diǎn)撥】該題重點(diǎn)考查基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的應(yīng)用，注意名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，動(dòng)詞人稱，形容詞和副詞的變化，時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。

　　【答案解析】

　　7

　　77. families→family

　　her修飾family，應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式。78.

　　79. careless→carelessly

　　修飾written應(yīng)用careless的副詞形式。

　　80.help前the去掉。ask sb for help向某人求助，help為不可數(shù)名詞，故去掉the。

　　81. too→either 否定句中表示“也”用either。

　　82.read前加to。be able to do sth能做某事。

　　83.chemist’s前加a。chemist在文中第一次出現(xiàn)，故應(yīng)用不定冠詞a。

　　84. but→and。

　　此處的前后分句是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用and。

　　85. will→would。 主句為過去時(shí)，從句也應(yīng)用過去時(shí)，故will改為would。

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　A person’s age no longer tells you something about

　　76. _______

　　his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer

　　77. ________

　　a particular year which one goes to school or goes to

　　78. ________

　　work or gets married or start a family. The social clock

　　79. ________

　　that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get

　　80. ________

　　a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be.

　　81. ________

　　It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university

　　82. ________

　　president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old

　　83. ________

　　man who has become a father for the first time. What we

　　84. _______

　　all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays.

　　85. ________

　　【參考答案】

　　76. something → anything

　　77. healthy → health

　　78. which → when

　　（或 year in）

　　79. start → starts

　　80. when to

　　81. was

　　82．√

　　83.or

　　a

　　84. What →As

　　85. public’s → public

　　【重慶南開中學(xué)】

　　第一節(jié)

　　短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤.對(duì)標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（︿

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．

　　to study Chinese. I’ve got some informations about foreigners

　　77．

　　learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you famous

　　78．

　　language school-Elite Language School.

　　It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy

　　79．

　　your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till

　　80．

　　March 19th . It is given in No. 1 Lecture Hall but it’s intended

　　81．

　　for beginners like you. Besides, the tuition is reasonable. It cost

　　82．

　　only 2,000 RMB. I think it suits you and you will enjoy them.

　　83．

　　If you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing 84．

　　www. Elite.org. The more you will know, the more eager you will

　　85．

　　be to come.

　　Hope to see you in Beijing soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　(河南五校聯(lián)考)

　　After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

　　look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

　　found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________

　　I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

　　He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

　　studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

　　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________

　　will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________

　　take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

　　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“畢業(yè)”。

　　2．month→months　month是可數(shù)名詞，several暗示應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“對(duì)……感興趣”。

　　4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語，修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。

　　5．do→did　根據(jù)邏輯可知這里表示畢業(yè)前的情況，故用一般過去時(shí)。do well in“干得好”。

　　6．√

　　7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

　　8．will→would　這里應(yīng)考慮主從句時(shí)態(tài)的呼應(yīng)，故用過去將來時(shí)。

　　9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人驚訝的是”。

　　10．said后加was　what he said是主語從句，“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動(dòng)詞。

　　【參考答案】

　　Women，present and ancient， at the home and．______ abroadwear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few ．______ people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly．．______ It takes in nourishment(營養(yǎng)) constantly．If it was short．______ of nourishmentit’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with．______ nourishmentit can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in．______ too manythat means hair has already used too much

　　7．______ nourishment

　　body gives it to the head．As time passes， ．______ brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______ (頭昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened．．______．去掉the ．─which

　　3．her─their．was─is ．falls─fall ．—minute

　　7．many─much ．去掉it

　　9 lead后加to

　　10．√

　　例如：

　　It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily

　　the

　　I was completely tree then, so I'll to say “yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00p.m.

　　am

　　in Friday evening.

　　on

　　2024高考英語：短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)（8）及答案解析

　　短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

　　【英語卷(解析)·2024屆浙江省“溫州八校”高三返校聯(lián)考（202408）】第一節(jié)：短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible members of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happens on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked on by a passing car, it drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to a girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured but we sent her to the nearest hospital. Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of society, I am aware of that being responsible is that it takes to make a better society.

　　【答案】【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

　　【答案解析】

　　members---member

　　考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：成長為一名有責(zé)任的成員并不難。因?yàn)榍懊嬗衋,故用單數(shù)形式。

　　happens---happened 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。我記得這件事發(fā)生在一個(gè)下雨的周日下午。事發(fā)生在過去，故用一般過去時(shí)。

　　waiting后面加for

　　考查固定搭配。Wait for sth等待某事；

　　knocked on ---down 考查固定搭配。Knock down sb 撞倒某人；

　　it—which

　　考查定語從句連接詞。Which指代 a passing car

　　a –the

　　考查冠詞。句意：一個(gè)男人立刻沖向那個(gè)女生給她急救；the girl上文已經(jīng)提到過，表示特指；

　　but---and

　　考查連詞；句意：幸運(yùn)地是她傷的不重并且我們送她去了最近的醫(yī)院。兩個(gè)句子是并列關(guān)系；

　　comparing---compared 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句意：與逃跑的司機(jī)相比，我對(duì)我的所作所為感到很驕傲；

　　aware of 去掉of

　　考查固定短語。Be aware of sth 意識(shí)到某事；be aware that 后面加句子。

　　that –what

　　考查表語從句。句意: 做為社會(huì)的一員，我意識(shí)到，責(zé)任正是這個(gè)社會(huì)所需要的。

　　【英語卷(解析)·2024屆河南省頂級(jí)名校高三入學(xué)定位考試（202408）】

　　B

　　One day Rosa wrote to her friend, who was a doctor, invite him to have dinner with her families. A few days later the doctor wrote back to her but she couldn’t read his writing because the letters were written careless. Then she asked her husband for the help, but he couldn’t read it, too. Then her husband got an idea. He told her that a chemist might be able read the doctor’s letter. So the woman went to chemist’s. The chemist in the shop studied the letter for a long time but he gave her a large bottle of medicine. He told the woman she would eat twelve pills a day. Finally Rosa still had no idea whether her friend will come or not.

　　【答案】【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】E1 短文改錯(cuò)記敘文

　　【思路點(diǎn)撥】該題重點(diǎn)考查基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的應(yīng)用，注意名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，動(dòng)詞人稱，形容詞和副詞的變化，時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)等基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。

　　【答案解析】

　　7

　　77. families→family

　　her修飾family，應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式。78.

　　79. careless→carelessly

　　修飾written應(yīng)用careless的副詞形式。

　　80.help前the去掉。ask sb for help向某人求助，help為不可數(shù)名詞，故去掉the。

　　81. too→either 否定句中表示“也”用either。

　　82.read前加to。be able to do sth能做某事。

　　83.chemist’s前加a。chemist在文中第一次出現(xiàn)，故應(yīng)用不定冠詞a。

　　84. but→and。

　　此處的前后分句是并列關(guān)系，不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用and。

　　85. will→would。 主句為過去時(shí)，從句也應(yīng)用過去時(shí)，故will改為would。

　　短文改錯(cuò)

　　A person’s age no longer tells you something about

　　76. _______

　　his social position, marriage or healthy. There’s no longer

　　77. ________

　　a particular year which one goes to school or goes to

　　78. ________

　　work or gets married or start a family. The social clock

　　79. ________

　　that kept us on time and told us when go to school, get

　　80. ________

　　a job, or stop working isn’t as strong as it was used to be.

　　81. ________

　　It doesn’t surprise us to hear a 28-year-old university

　　82. ________

　　president or a 35-year-old grandmother, or 70-year-old

　　83. ________

　　man who has become a father for the first time. What we

　　84. _______

　　all know, public’s ideas are changing nowadays.

　　85. ________

　　【參考答案】

　　76. something → anything

　　77. healthy → health

　　78. which → when

　　（或 year in）

　　79. start → starts

　　80. when to

　　81. was

　　82．√

　　83.or

　　a

　　84. What →As

　　85. public’s → public

　　【重慶南開中學(xué)】

　　第一節(jié)

　　短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯(cuò)誤.對(duì)標(biāo)題號(hào)的每一行做出判斷：如無錯(cuò)誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯(cuò)誤（每行只有一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個(gè)詞：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個(gè)詞：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（︿

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am pleasant to learn that you’re coming to Beijing 76．

　　to study Chinese. I’ve got some informations about foreigners

　　77．

　　learning Chinese. Here I’d like to recommend you famous

　　78．

　　language school-Elite Language School.

　　It reported that such a Chinese training course will satisfy

　　79．

　　your demands. It starts in February 20th and lasts a month till

　　80．

　　March 19th . It is given in No. 1 Lecture Hall but it’s intended

　　81．

　　for beginners like you. Besides, the tuition is reasonable. It cost

　　82．

　　only 2,000 RMB. I think it suits you and you will enjoy them.

　　83．

　　If you have more questions, please let me know or just sufing 84．

　　www. Elite.org. The more you will know, the more eager you will

　　85．

　　be to come.

　　Hope to see you in Beijing soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　(河南五校聯(lián)考)

　　After I finished the school this year, I began to1.________

　　look for work. Now several month later, I still hadn't 2.________

　　found the job that I was interested. Last Sunday morning，3.________

　　I received a phone call from a man calling him Mr. Smith.4.________

　　He said to me on the phone, “I hear you do very well in your5.________

　　studies. I may provide a job for you.” I entered 6.________

　　his office with a beaten heart. How I hoped that I 7.________

　　will go through the job-hunting talk today and he would8.________

　　take me on as a lab assistant. But to my surprised, 9.________

　　what he said disappointing. He only needed a model.10.________

　　答案與解析：

　　1．去掉the　finish school是固定搭配，表示“畢業(yè)”。

　　2．month→months　month是可數(shù)名詞，several暗示應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。

　　3．interested后加in　be interested in是固定搭配，表示“對(duì)……感興趣”。

　　4．him→himself　calling himself Mr. Smith短語作定語，修飾a man表示“自稱Mr. Smith”的男子。

　　5．do→did　根據(jù)邏輯可知這里表示畢業(yè)前的情況，故用一般過去時(shí)。do well in“干得好”。

　　6．√

　　7．beaten→beating　a beating heart“忐忑不安的心”。

　　8．will→would　這里應(yīng)考慮主從句時(shí)態(tài)的呼應(yīng)，故用過去將來時(shí)。

　　9．surprised→surprise　to one's surprise是固定搭配，表示“令某人驚訝的是”。

　　10．said后加was　what he said是主語從句，“他的話是令人失望的”。句子缺少系動(dòng)詞。

　　【參考答案】

　　Women，present and ancient， at the home and．______ abroadwear long hair,that adds to their beauty．But few ．______ people realize it affects her brains．Hair grows constantly．．______ It takes in nourishment(營養(yǎng)) constantly．If it was short．______ of nourishmentit’ll die and falls off．Body supplies hair with．______ nourishmentit can’t be stopped even in a minutes．If it takes in．______ too manythat means hair has already used too much

　　7．______ nourishment

　　body gives it to the head．As time passes， ．______ brain is relatively short of nourishment．It leads dizziness 9．______ (頭昏)．Therefore one’s brains will be weakened．．______．去掉the ．─which

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　　in Friday evening.

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