2024屆高考英語一輪復習全套課件:第3部分 寫作指導 專題突破1 提綱作文(北師大版)
【參考范文】 Dear Tom, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing for two days.As the capital city of China,Beijing lies in the north of China,covering a land of 16,000 square kilometers with a population of 1.3 million.As an international city,it is blessed with the most world cultural heritage sites on the earth. As for your 2-day schedule,my suggestions are as follows.On the first day,you may pay a visit to the Great Wall,where you can take some photos as well as buy some souvenirs.On the second day,you can stand on the Tian’anmen Gate-tower to overlook the Forbidden City.After that,you can look around the Palace Museum,so as to immerse yourself in the charm of traditional Chinese culture.What do you think of this plan? Welcome to Beijing!I hope you’ll fall in love with it when arriving here.Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua
(二)(2024·安徽皖江名校聯考) 你校學生會將舉行一場高三年級的英語話劇比賽,請你以校學生會李明的名義給外教Wilson Smith寫一封信請其擔任裁判并說明話劇比賽的相關事宜。應包括以下內容: 1.每班限報一個話劇,人數不超過10人,不少于2人; 2.話劇表演必須用英語表達,時長不超過半小時; 3.話劇內容必須思想健康,適合中學生觀看; 4.時間:12月10日; 5.地點:學校大禮堂。 注意: 1.詞數100左右; 2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 3.開頭和結尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數。
Dear Mr Smith, How is everything going on???
We are looking forward to your replay.Thank you. Your sincerely, Li Ming
【參考范文】 Dear Mr Smith, How is everything going on?May we have the honor to invite you to be the judge of our coming play contest?We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES. The Students’ Union is going to hold an English play contest among Senior 3 students on December 10th.Each class can only present only one play,in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students.All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour.In addition,the content of the plays must be mentally healthy and suitable for Senior students.The location will be in the school hall.
It is really a good chance to practice students’ oral English as well as to show their talents.We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective. We are looking forward to your replay.Thank you. Your sincerely, Li Ming
六、倡議書 典例 北京某中學討論是否應該騎車上學。假如你是該校學生會主席,請你用英語寫一封倡議書,號召同學們騎自行車上學。內容需包括: 1.建議騎自行車上學; 2.自行車是學生常用交通工具; 3.騎自行車的一些好處; 4.騎自行車需注意的問題。 注意: 1.詞數100左右,信的開頭和結束語已為你寫好(不計入總詞數); 2.可根據內容要點適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear schoolmates, Recently,a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school.??
The Students’ Union June 13
【參考范文】 Dear schoolmates, Recently,a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school.As far as I am concerned,we should ride to and from school.Firstly,riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot.Next,parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school,no matter how busy the traffic could be.Actually,bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you are off it.In this way,you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you are here.Don’t hesitate,everybody!Let’s ride to school! The Students’ Union June 13
1.從寫作內容上來說,一般倡議書中應該包括倡議原因、目的、具體內容和要求等。 2.從寫作手法上來說,倡議書的措辭要貼切,情感要真摯,語言要富于號召性,可多用should,ought to,may,can等表示建議的情態動詞;倡議書的篇幅不宜過長,開頭要簡單明了,吸引同學們的注意,結尾最好加上簡潔有力的呼吁。 3.從謀篇布局來說,倡議書書寫格式和一般書信大致相同,一般由稱呼、正文、結尾、落款四部分組成,有些倡議書還可根據需要加適當的標題。 (1)稱呼。寫稱呼的目的是為了明確倡議的對象,一般要依據倡議的對象而選用適當的稱呼,如:Dear friends,Dear schoolmates,Dear editor,Dear students等。
(2)正文。倡議意在引起他人的響應,這就要求作者須清楚說明倡議背景、原因,申明倡議目的,做到讓人信服,人們才能響應并自覺行動。倡議的內容也要具體,要寫明有什么作用。一般倡議的內容可分為幾點來寫,這樣倡議的對象更容易明白,效果也更好。 (3)結尾。結尾可表明倡議者的決心和希望或者提出某種建議,但是一般不在結尾用些表示敬意或祝愿的話。 (4)落款。在右下方署名發出倡議的集體或倡議者的姓名,然后另起一行,署上發出倡議的時間。
1.Please don’t smoke,spit or litter in public places.請不要在公共場所吸煙、吐痰或亂扔雜物。 2.Let’s make a good network environment.Let’s be civilized Netizen.讓我們攜手共建良好的網絡環境。讓我們做文明的網民。 3.Hopefully you will join in the action and extend warm help to those needy persons.但愿你會加入這項活動,向需要幫助的人傳遞溫暖。 4.We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.我們都希望快樂、健康地成長,為了這個目標我們必須做些什么。 5.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.我想強調的是我們需要更多地傾聽他人。
6.We students should listen more to our classmates,thus we will help and learn from each other,and a friendship is likely to be formed.我們學生應當更多地傾聽同班同學的聲音,這樣我們就會互相幫助、互相學習,并可能發展出友誼。 7.It is a good idea for us Senior 3 students to have daily exercise,for taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.我們高三的學生每天鍛煉身體是有益的,因為鍛煉能夠增強體質,保持清醒的頭腦。 8.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.教育部號召學生們每天鍛煉一小時,希望他們能擁有可以工作五十年和享受一生的健康體魄。
(一)(2024·黑龍江齊齊哈爾實驗中學期中考試) 假設你是李華。為了促進學生多讀書,讀好書,打造校園書香氛圍,你校發起讀書運動。請你按照以下要點寫一篇倡議書,倡導同學們讀書。 表達要點: 1.為什么讀書; 2.讀什么書,怎樣讀書; 3.發起倡議。 注意: 1.可適當增加細節使行文連貫; 2.詞數100左右; 3.開頭已經為你寫好,不計入總詞數。 Dear schoolmates,
【參考范文】 Dear schoolmates, Do you like reading? Books are like our friends.Just like hanging around with a good friend,reading can broaden our horizons,enlarge our knowledge,improve our taste for life and keep us company when we feel lonely. So what books should we read?We should choose the books which benefit us most with knowledge,virtue and good interest.And we’d better think while reading instead of just taking in everything blindly.Taking notes will help us learn more. Now,aiming to motivate us students to read more good books and build a more cultural school environment,our school has launched a reading campaign.This is really a meaningful activity.Why not pick up a book now and join in the fun?Wish you a good journey in books.
(二) 為了有一個美好的校園環境,請你代表學生會向全校發出倡議。要求內容包括以下要點,并闡述你的理由。 1.不要亂扔垃圾,愛護花草樹木; 2.不得高聲喧嘩; 3.循環使用資料; 4.保持教室整潔。 注意: 1.詞數100左右; 2.注意文章的連貫性。
【參考范文】 Dear friends, Do you want to study in a beautiful campus?So it is our duty to make our school comfortable to study in.To complete this task,we should keep the following rules in mind.First of all,don’t litter about in our school.It’s smelly and attracts flies,you know.And we should protect our school’s environment by looking after flowers and trees around.Of course,don’t yell or shout out so that we can study in a quiet environment.It’s also suggested that we should reuse everything recyclable,which is money-saving and environmentally friendly.Finally,please keep classrooms clean,use the blackboard responsibly and remember there is no drinking or eating in the classrooms.Let’s all take action now and contribute to building a harmonious environment. Thank you! The Students’ Union March 1
1.Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.女士們,先生們,請注意。下面播報一則通知。 2.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.歡迎各位參加這次的競賽。 3.The Students’ Union has decided to organize a music week.學生會決定組織“音樂周”活動。 4.Please sign your name/fill in a...form.請您簽上自己的姓名/填寫……表格。 5.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups later.請認真聽,之后我們會進行小組討論。 6.Come to have the great fun!快來玩吧! 7.The place for the activities will be announced later.活動地點將稍后通知。
8.There’s been a change in our time schedule this week.The meeting will be put off until next week.本周我們的計劃表有所變動,會議將推遲至下周。 9.Don’t forget to bring your gifts with you.不要忘了帶禮物。 10.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.請盡早確認您的參加信息。
(2024·寧夏大學附屬中學月考)假如你是校學生會主席,高二年級將于下個月舉辦英語周活動,請根據以下內容寫一篇英語書面通知。 時間:12月7日~11日 下午4:30~6:30。 地點:學校體育館。 活動安排: 1.周一開幕式,周五閉幕式; 2.周二知識競賽,周三英語演講比賽,周四英文歌曲比賽。 特別要求:每班準備一個英語短劇,在開幕式或閉幕式上表演。請各班務必認真組織,爭取把這次英語周辦得豐富多彩。 注意: 1.詞數100左右; 2.要點齊全,可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫; 3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。 提示詞:體育館 gymnasium Notice The English Week held every two years is approaching.??
The Students’ Union November 28
【參考范文】 Notice The English Week held every two years is approaching.All the students in Grade Two are required to take part in it at 4∶30 pm every day,and it will last 5 days,from December 7th to 11th.The activities include the Opening Ceremony on Monday and the Closing Ceremony on Friday.Besides,we have Knowledge Contest,English Speech Contest and English Songs Competition in the rest of the three days as well. As for the details of the competition,please ask your English teacher.Be sure that each class should give an English drama performance and make every effort to present us an interesting and colorful English Week. The Students’ Union November 28
三、致辭 典例 (2024·福建莆田第二十五中學月考)外教Smith先生將來你校工作,安排任教你班的口語課,請你以英語老師的身份致歡迎辭。要點如下: 1.Smith先生來自美國; 2.他在美國也是一位老師,他的課生動有趣; 3.他將在我校工作兩年; 4.起初,我們可能不能完全聽懂他的課,但這種情況不會持續很久; 5.希望他在我校工作期間生活愉快、工作順利。 注意: 1.不能逐條翻譯上述要點; 2.詞數100左右。
【參考范文】 Boys and girls, Attention,please!I’m glad to have the honor to introduce to you a guest,Mr Smith.He is a teacher from America.In the following two years,he will teach us oral English.His classes are lively and interesting.So I’m sure that you will enjoy his classes. At first,we may have some trouble in understanding him.However,as time goes on,it will get better and better.I hope you will make best use of the chance to practise your spoken English.Best wishes to Mr Smith. That’s all.Thank you.
一般致辭包括以下要素:稱呼(Salutation),客套語(Conversational Routine),介紹情況(Body),結束語(Ending)。 1.稱呼。致辭開始一般都要以Ladies and gentlemen,Boys and girls,Teachers and students,Dear friends或Welcome everybody等開始,以吸引聽眾注意。 2.客套語。歡迎他人時可講:It is my special pleasure to welcome...等;開幕時可講:Thank you for coming tonight to celebrate this happy and joyous occasion等;歡送時可講:May you have a wonderful time等。 3.介紹情況。做好這類題目把握好提示十分重要。歡迎詞必須交代清楚歡迎誰,客人的主要身份,同時把客人介紹給大家。歡送詞則要說清歡送哪一位,該客人什么時候離開,客人在逗留期間進行了哪些活動等。 4.結束語。結束時一般以Thank you 致謝或表達其他祝福如:I wish you the best of luck in the New Year,I hope you will have a very enjoyable stay等。
1.First of all,let’s give our warm welcome to our honorable guest(s).首先,請向我們尊貴的客人致以熱烈的歡迎。 2.Now let’s welcome...to give us a lecture.現在請歡迎……給我們做講座。 3.Now let us invite...to address us.現在請歡迎……為大家講話。 4.I would also like to take this opportunity to wish him/her a pleasant safe journey home.我也想借此機會祝他/她歸途一帆風順。 5.We wish Mr/Mrs/Miss...a pleasant journey and good health.我們祝……先生/夫人/小姐一帆風順,身體健康。 6.We are looking forward to seeing him/her again.我們期待再次見到他/她。 7.It is my special pleasure to welcome our new member,Mr Brown,who has come here from the United States.我十分榮幸在此歡迎我們的新成員,布朗先生。他剛從美國回來。
8.I am very happy to see all of you here to celebrate the arrival of the New Year.我很高興大家歡聚在此慶祝新年的到來。 9.Now in bidding farewell to...,allow me on behalf of...to express our sincere thanks once again to him/her.在此向……道別,請允許我代表……再次向他/她致以誠摯的謝意。 10.Today,we gather here to have a send-off meeting.今天,我們聚集在此召開送別會。
(一) 美籍教師Mr Black明天將離開你校回國。他教你們多年口語與聽力,對學生既和藹又嚴格;他的課講得既生動又有趣,受到學生的歡迎。在他回國前夕,學生舉行歡送會,請你代表全體同學發言,對布萊克先生表示感謝并祝他旅途愉快。 注意: 1.要點要全,但不能逐句翻譯。 2.詞數100左右。
【參考范文】 Dear friends, Now we gather here to have a send-off meeting.Our English teacher Mr Black is going to return to his home country tomorrow.On behalf of all my schoolmates here I express our sincere thanks to him.In the past few years,Mr Black has taught us spoken English and extensive listening.As is known to us all,not only is Mr Black kind and patient to us,but he is also strict with us now and then.With his help,we all have made rapid progress in English.We enjoyed his lessons very much because his method of teaching was quite different from other teachers’.The lessons he gave us were both lively and interesting.Now he will leave our school soon.We thank him very much for his wonderful work and wish him a good journey.
(二) Mr Alexander應邀來你校做講座,講解如何學習寫作及中國學生學英語的情況。現由你代表學生用英語致歡迎辭。內容應包括: 1.表示歡迎; 2.介紹Mr Alexander:美國著名語言學家,著有New Concept English,Follow Me等書籍; 3.同學們提問題。 注意: 1.要點齊全,但不能逐條翻譯; 2.詞數100左右。 參考詞匯:語言學家 linguist
【參考范文】 Boys and girls, We feel greatly honored to be here with Professor Alexander,a world famous linguist from America.Now allow me on behalf of all the students of our school to extend our warm welcome and sincere greetings to our distinguished guest.Mr Alexander has written lots of books,including New Concept English and Follow Me,both of which are well known to us.Today Mr Alexander is here to give us a lecture on writing and about English study in middle schools in China.If you have any question on English study,you are free to turn to him for help.Now let us invite Professor Smith to address us.
四、發言稿 典例 (2024·天津高考)假設你是某大學的學生李津。你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席,負責規劃、組織俱樂部的相關活動。你欲參選。請按以下提示,寫一篇競選演講稿。 ☆ 個人優勢介紹(如性格、特長等); ☆ 組織校內活動的設想(如舉辦講座、英語晚會等); ☆ 組織校際交流活動的設想(如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等); ☆ 表達當選的愿望。 注意: 1.詞數不少于100; 2.請勿提及真實學校名稱; 3.可適當加入細節,以使內容充實、行文連貫; 4.開頭、結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯:副主席 vice president;競選 run for Good afternoon,my dear friends. My name is Li Jin.? ? ? Thank you.
【參考范文】 Good afternoon,my dear friends. My name is Li Jin.Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club.Concerning this position,I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing,getting on well with others,and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.If I am lucky enough to be the vice president,I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students.In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English,I intend to organize some activities such as lectures,English parties,English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president. Thank you.