GRE寫作提綱舉例指導（16）
16Although many people think that the luxu ries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
部分同意
1、現代生活的便利確實使人們的對技術的依賴性越來越強
depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculat or for calculation; depend on computer for writing documents; depend on Internet for in formation
2、但是現代生活的便利也給人們帶來了挑戰，使變得 intellectually strong to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient; people are expected for more productivity
3、工作的便利使人能夠獨立完成復雜任務 national survey analysis
16T Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
盡管很多人認為現在奢侈安逸的生活是無害的，但實際上這樣的生活阻止了人們培養堅強獨立的性格
?、?I concede 有些時候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思進取了。Davy, 晚年沒有什么成就。
?、?但是追求安逸的生活是科技發展和人類進步的動力。人們追求更多的休閑時間，從而有了更高效的工作。
③ 如果缺乏現在高科技所提供的舒適條件，有些研究成果出不來。 如：生物學領域、軍事領域 都要求
sophisticated apparatus
Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.
While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?It is important for us to realize the limitation of mo dern facilities and that potential danger which will be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.
16Although many people think that the luxu ries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
部分同意
1、現代生活的便利確實使人們的對技術的依賴性越來越強
depend on automobile for travel; depend on calculat or for calculation; depend on computer for writing documents; depend on Internet for in formation
2、但是現代生活的便利也給人們帶來了挑戰，使變得 intellectually strong to creat more convenience, further improvve technology develop to help make life more efficient; people are expected for more productivity
3、工作的便利使人能夠獨立完成復雜任務 national survey analysis
16T Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
盡管很多人認為現在奢侈安逸的生活是無害的，但實際上這樣的生活阻止了人們培養堅強獨立的性格
?、?I concede 有些時候有些人在得到安逸生活以后就不思進取了。Davy, 晚年沒有什么成就。
?、?但是追求安逸的生活是科技發展和人類進步的動力。人們追求更多的休閑時間，從而有了更高效的工作。
?、?如果缺乏現在高科技所提供的舒適條件，有些研究成果出不來。 如：生物學領域、軍事領域 都要求
sophisticated apparatus
Without modern facilities, we could hardly do anything.
While, without such modern facilities, can we become truly strong and independent individuals?It is important for us to realize the limitation of mo dern facilities and that potential danger which will be aroused if we lost our domination over modern facilities and too rely on them.
