2024湖南省湘鄉市高考英語短文改錯（二輪）精編（5）

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet，because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“There's a bum (流浪漢) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywhere along the way，it told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped bus and telephoned the police. When the police came，they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway，which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all！

　　1.

　　第二句 herself 改為 himself

　　第三句the改為a

　　第四句say改為said

　　第五句pass改為passed

　　第六句anywhere改為somewhere

　　第七句told前加was

　　第八句immediate改為immediately

　　第九句or改為and

　　第十句from改為in

　　第十一句hour改為hours

　　短文改錯

　　以下標有題號的每一行均有一個錯誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several

　　courses.In the evening, he studies at home until deep into

　　2.

　　the night.He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work

　　3.

　　effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study

　　4.

　　when his father came up and advised him to have a break.

　　Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they

　　5.

　　liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs

　　6.

　　where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a

　　7.

　　picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On

　　8.

　　Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He

　　9.

　　said it was only why he had a better weekend.

　　10.

　　【參考答案】2.

　　1. devote---devotes

　　2. studies---studied

　　3. too sleepy---so sleepy

　　4. In Sunday--- On Sunday

　　5. had good--- had a good

　　6. liked it---去掉it

　　7. fly---flying

　　8. but---and

　　9. actively---active

　　10. why---because

　　短文改錯

　　短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加﹑刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞的下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　【參考答案】3.

　　My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to

　　buying

　　Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for∧ long

　　there

　　a

　　holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized

　　and

　　that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had

　　in

　　was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my

　　were

　　luggage

　　friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　friend’s

　　felt

　　【2024模擬題】短文改錯 （共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計分。

　　Our school newspaper is looking after an editor for its English edition. The job mainly included two parts: One is to choose properly English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students. The others is to pick out article from those written by students in our school and edit them for use.

　　We hope that he/she can meet following requirements: First, he/she is willing to be devote some of the spare time to serve the others. Second, it's necessary for him/ her to be good at both English and fine art. However, the ability to use the computer is important as well.

　　Those who is interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.

　　短文改錯

　　第一句：after 改為for

　　第二句：included 改為 includes

　　第三句：properly 改為proper

　　第四句：others 改為other;

　　article 改為articles

　　第五句：meet 后加the

　　第六句：去掉be； serve 改為serving

　　第七句：However改為Besides

　　第八句：is改為are

　　【2024模擬題】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加： 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ ∧ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Time flies! This is a third year that I have been in this school. In the past two and a half years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me best was an activity called “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. After divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We continued doing that until all the work was done. Although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.

　　【參考答案】短文改錯：

　　a改為the

　　2. had 改為has

　　3. best 改為most

　　4. In 改為 On

　　5. which改為where或前面加on

　　6. so（a long time） 改為such

　　7. divided前加being

　　8. (into the) hole 改為holes

　　9. them改為it

　　10.去掉but

　　第一節

　　短文改錯 (共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語

　　言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best. However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don’t want to follow them. With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right. Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.

　　【參考答案】短文改錯：（共10小題，滿分10分）

　　1. considered-consider

　　2. an advice-advice

　　3. experiences-experience

　　4. what-how

　　5. they-we

　　6. Therefore-However

　　7. passed-passing

　　8. have-has

　　9. for-to

　　10. worth-are worth

　　2024湖南省湘鄉市高考英語短文改錯（二輪）精編（5）

　　短文改錯。

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Once a man got on a bus for New York. He hid herself in the toilet，because he did not want to pay. But the passenger saw him. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say，“There's a bum (流浪漢) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was pass from person to person. But anywhere along the way，it told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped bus and telephoned the police. When the police came，they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway，which resulted from a traffic jam. The police searched for several hour. Of course they found no bomb at all！

　　1.

　　第二句 herself 改為 himself

　　第三句the改為a

　　第四句say改為said

　　第五句pass改為passed

　　第六句anywhere改為somewhere

　　第七句told前加was

　　第八句immediate改為immediately

　　第九句or改為and

　　第十句from改為in

　　第十一句hour改為hours

　　短文改錯

　　以下標有題號的每一行均有一個錯誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　Li Hua is a senior three student who devote himself to his lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several

　　courses.In the evening, he studies at home until deep into

　　2.

　　the night.He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn’t work

　　3.

　　effectively. In Sunday morning, Li Hua was about to study

　　4.

　　when his father came up and advised him to have a break.

　　Soon they had good idea. They bought a kite which they

　　5.

　　liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs

　　6.

　　where Li Hua enjoyed himself fly the kite. The family had a

　　7.

　　picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air. On

　　8.

　　Monday, Li Hua was energetic and actively in class. He

　　9.

　　said it was only why he had a better weekend.

　　10.

　　【參考答案】2.

　　1. devote---devotes

　　2. studies---studied

　　3. too sleepy---so sleepy

　　4. In Sunday--- On Sunday

　　5. had good--- had a good

　　6. liked it---去掉it

　　7. fly---flying

　　8. but---and

　　9. actively---active

　　10. why---because

　　短文改錯

　　短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加﹑刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞的下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　【參考答案】3.

　　My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to

　　buying

　　Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for∧ long

　　there

　　a

　　holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized

　　and

　　that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had

　　in

　　was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my

　　were

　　luggage

　　friend ,he lent to me lots of clothes.I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.

　　friend’s

　　felt

　　【2024模擬題】短文改錯 （共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計分。

　　Our school newspaper is looking after an editor for its English edition. The job mainly included two parts: One is to choose properly English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the internet for us students. The others is to pick out article from those written by students in our school and edit them for use.

　　We hope that he/she can meet following requirements: First, he/she is willing to be devote some of the spare time to serve the others. Second, it's necessary for him/ her to be good at both English and fine art. However, the ability to use the computer is important as well.

　　Those who is interested in the job, please get in touch with the Students' Union this week.

　　短文改錯

　　第一句：after 改為for

　　第二句：included 改為 includes

　　第三句：properly 改為proper

　　第四句：others 改為other;

　　article 改為articles

　　第五句：meet 后加the

　　第六句：去掉be； serve 改為serving

　　第七句：However改為Besides

　　第八句：is改為are

　　【2024模擬題】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

　　文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

　　增加： 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（ ∧ ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改： 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Time flies! This is a third year that I have been in this school. In the past two and a half years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me best was an activity called “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes. Having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. After divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We continued doing that until all the work was done. Although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.

　　【參考答案】短文改錯：

　　a改為the

　　2. had 改為has

　　3. best 改為most

　　4. In 改為 On

　　5. which改為where或前面加on

　　6. so（a long time） 改為such

　　7. divided前加being

　　8. (into the) hole 改為holes

　　9. them改為it

　　10.去掉but

　　第一節

　　短文改錯 (共10小題;每小題1分,滿分10分)

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語

　　言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Generally, we prefer to do things the way we considered to be the best. However, it is important to listen to those who love us and want to give us an advice when we have serious problems in our lives. Parents have gained some life experiences and they know what to act in different situations. That’s why we should ask them for help first when they have problems. Therefore, there are moments when we avoid them and don’t want to follow them. With time passed, my brother as well as I have realized that our parents are right. Please turn for your parents when in trouble, for they worth trusting and ready to offer help all the time.

　　【參考答案】短文改錯：（共10小題，滿分10分）

　　1. considered-consider

　　2. an advice-advice

　　3. experiences-experience

　　4. what-how

　　5. they-we

　　6. Therefore-However

　　7. passed-passing

　　8. have-has

　　9. for-to

　　10. worth-are worth