英語作文庫‖2023全國研究生入學(xué)考試英語一大作文參考范文
2023全國研究生入學(xué)考試英語一大作文延續(xù)了校園教育這個(gè)大主題,仍然是圖畫作文。
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the picture below. In your essay, you should:
1) describe the picture briefly,
2) interpret the implied meaning, and
3) give your comments.
Write your answer on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
歷年來,英語一圖畫作文題干部分基本保持不變,發(fā)生變化的只有圖畫,所以審題重點(diǎn)是圖畫,考生的作文只要與圖畫內(nèi)容密切相關(guān)即可,作文考察的重點(diǎn)是整體的英語語言表達(dá)能力。
圖畫作文寫作時(shí)需要根據(jù)題目提綱中的3個(gè)要點(diǎn),分三段展開,第一段描述圖畫內(nèi)容,第二段對圖畫中隱含的寓意進(jìn)行解釋和論述,第三段進(jìn)行評論并總結(jié)全文。
圖畫內(nèi)容
此圖畫中的內(nèi)容并不復(fù)雜,兩個(gè)女生正站在校園講座的海報(bào)前。一個(gè)學(xué)生說“不是我們專業(yè)的,聽了也沒多大用”,而另一個(gè)學(xué)生則說“聽聽總會有好處”。很明顯,圖片內(nèi)容涉及到兩個(gè)人對同一事物的不同態(tài)度。
結(jié)合時(shí)代特點(diǎn)提煉關(guān)鍵詞
當(dāng)今社會的重大特征是學(xué)科交叉,知識融合,這一特征決定了當(dāng)代大學(xué)生要提高自身的綜合素質(zhì)、要廣泛學(xué)習(xí)、多方獲取知識,拓展知識面,做復(fù)合型人才,所以這幅圖畫考察的內(nèi)容也契合了這個(gè)大的時(shí)代背景。大家在作文中只要能自圓其說、自成邏輯就行,可以選取“廣泛學(xué)習(xí)”、“拓寬知識面”、“多方獲取知識”、“全面發(fā)展”、“思想開放”、“積極/消極的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度”、“保持好奇心”等關(guān)鍵詞作為作文主題。不過綜合來看,應(yīng)該是“廣泛學(xué)習(xí)”這個(gè)角度比較好寫。
下面是參考范文,同學(xué)們可以瀏覽、熟讀并背誦模板,紅色字體內(nèi)容為模板,可根據(jù)不同圖片內(nèi)容套用,黑色字體內(nèi)容為針對本次圖畫所寫的和extensive learning 相關(guān)的內(nèi)容,綠色字體的文字為文章構(gòu)思以及寫作時(shí)的要點(diǎn)提示。
參考范文
As we can see in the picture, two girls are standing in front of a poster for a campus lecture. The one on the left says," Its useless to attend the lecture; it has nothing to do with our specialized subject." By contrast, the other student says, "We should go to the lecture; anyhow, we can learn something useful."(描述圖畫內(nèi)容) Simple as the image is, its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed is worth pondering(承上啟下,引出下面對圖畫寓意的論述)
Undoubtedly, the author strives to draw our attention to the importance of extensive learning(指出圖畫的寓意,表明中心論點(diǎn)/關(guān)鍵詞extensive learning).As we all know, one apparent feature of todays society is the blending of different disciplines and the integration of knowledge from various fields. So it determines college students should learn extensively, broaden their outlooks and become compound talents. (分論點(diǎn)1,也可以理解為題目要求中的Interpretation 1,結(jié)合時(shí)代背景談為什么要廣泛學(xué)習(xí))
Inaddition, by attending various lectures and acquiring knowledge from dif-ferent fields, undergraduates can develop their overall ability, so they can be more qualified to face the upcoming difficulties and challenges before stepping into a competitive society. (分論點(diǎn)2,也可以理解為題目要求中的Interpretation 2,進(jìn)一步解釋廣泛學(xué)習(xí)的重要性,即為了更好地面對困難和挑戰(zhàn))
Based on the discussion above, I suppose that not until we realize the significance of extensive learning and then put this attitude into practice, can we progress step by step.(倒裝句,承上啟下,強(qiáng)調(diào)extensive learning的重要性)As college students, we have easy access to various lectures and other learning resources on campus so we should make full use of them.(回到圖畫中的關(guān)鍵詞“聽講座”,重申中心論點(diǎn)extensive learning,做出評論,首尾呼應(yīng))Only in this way can we embrace a promising future. (倒裝句,呼吁行動(dòng),結(jié)束全文)
我用Grammarly檢測了一下,這篇范文的得分是99分,所以應(yīng)該相當(dāng)不錯(cuò),大家可以放心參考啊!
重要單詞和搭配
1. 廣泛學(xué)習(xí) extensive learning
2. 獲取知識 acquire knowledge
3.復(fù)合型人才compound talent
4. 聽講座 attentd a lecture
5. 拓寬眼界 broaden ones outlook
6. 海報(bào) poster
7. 發(fā)人深省,引人深思的 thought-provoking
8. 相比之下,相反 by contrast
9.很容易獲取...... have easy access to
10.充分利用 make full use of